You know your wife is comfortable editing your writing when she circles an entire paragraph and writes “Make Better” next to it.
Shannon Ryan
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You know your wife is comfortable editing your writing when she circles an entire paragraph and writes “Make Better” next to it.
Sometimes, that is all it takes, though I like when they at least give a hint of why. Of course, Fluffy’s critiques are not much better and usually consist of “I like it” or “I don’t like it”. I have to pry to get more information out of her.